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  • Offline Albus Dumbledore
  • Character changes & retcons!
    « on: January 16, 2016, 05:51:11 PM »
    If your character is already approved, you're in the right place!

    If you've made any alterations to your character's sheet, or have retconned portions of the sheet, please reply to this topic with the following code and an admin will review it.

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  • Offline Ares Awning
  • Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #1 on: January 23, 2016, 12:19:23 AM »
    Just a note -

    It makes it a lot easier if you would tag your characters in your posts if you're not posting from that account, or link to their profile. It makes it easier for us to look at your sheet when you're sorting multiples!
    « Last Edit: November 18, 2016, 05:38:47 PM by Ares Awning »

  • Offline Sunee Chatree
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #2 on: July 21, 2017, 10:36:41 PM »
    Character's name: @Sunee Chatree
    Changes made: Finished the fifth year portion of her history
    Links to required posts: Class Post

    @Em. I read through her sheet and everything looks good except you forgot to change her year to sixth year! Once you fix that she'll be approved
    « Last Edit: July 25, 2017, 04:37:17 AM by Dylan »

  • Offline Iosef Zolotov
  • Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #3 on: July 29, 2017, 07:45:18 AM »
    Character's name: @Iosef Zolotov
    Changes made: Updated his 4th year and his summer camp at Spider Island

    @Iosef Zolotov if you'd like to age Iosef up, please link two class posts you made (at Durm or at ISS) in the last school year <33
    « Last Edit: July 29, 2017, 08:48:34 AM by Sophie »

  • Offline Emma Archambault
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #4 on: August 03, 2017, 09:15:46 AM »
    Character's name: @Emma Archambault
    Changes made: put her sheet in her profile and added her fourth year to age her up

    approved!
    « Last Edit: August 03, 2017, 11:19:35 AM by Ashton »

  • Offline Jonas Rosenthal
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #5 on: August 03, 2017, 10:44:06 AM »
    Character's name: @Jonas Rosenthal
    Changes made: added his fifth year to age him up and changed his rp response

    approved!
    « Last Edit: August 03, 2017, 11:21:00 AM by Ashton »

  • Offline Reagan Baisley
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #6 on: August 03, 2017, 11:13:35 AM »
    Character's name: @Reagan Baisley
    Changes made: moved her sheet to her profile, changed her spine, updated her age, tweaked a few tiny things in appearance and history, added recent history and a new rp response

    Approved~
    « Last Edit: August 04, 2017, 02:44:32 AM by Taylor »
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  • Offline Ding Na Xia
  • Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #7 on: August 03, 2017, 07:33:34 PM »
    Character's name: @Ding Na Xia
    Changes made: Added a paragraph or two to history, changed ages, fixed headers and such.

    first rank post thingy.

    Approved~
    « Last Edit: August 04, 2017, 03:16:43 AM by Taylor »

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  • Offline Honey Bea Flume
  • Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #8 on: August 04, 2017, 12:02:09 AM »
    Character's name: Honey Bea Flume
    Changes made:
     -changed brother's name and age and rewrote a little bit of history to reflect that
     -added recent history
     -new rp response

    Approved~
    « Last Edit: August 04, 2017, 03:19:25 AM by Taylor »

  • Offline Sidonie Riviére
  • Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #9 on: August 04, 2017, 12:51:38 AM »
    Character's name: @Sidonie Riviére
    Changes made:
    - Added sheet to profile
    - Added history.
    - Ages
    - fixed headers because photobucket *shakes fist*
    - that's about it. Will fumble through it all next round.

    Approved~
    « Last Edit: August 04, 2017, 03:21:33 AM by Taylor »

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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #10 on: August 04, 2017, 07:24:20 PM »
    Character's name: Luca
    Changes made: updated his and his families age, changed his mother, sister's and one of his step-sister's names to correlate with a WIP, added a paragraph to the end of his history !~

    Approved~
    « Last Edit: August 05, 2017, 03:57:13 AM by Taylor »

  • Offline Dennis Creevey
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #11 on: August 05, 2017, 04:28:32 AM »
    Character's name: @Dennis Creevey
    Changes made:
    - Added history & updated ages
    - Changed him to a 6th year
    - Fixed wording (minor edits) in appearance & Personality
    Class posts: ONE | TWO

    approved!
    « Last Edit: August 07, 2017, 02:10:16 AM by Ashton »
      

  • Offline Emily Fleming
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #12 on: August 05, 2017, 10:49:35 AM »
    Character's name: @Emily Fleming
    Changes made:

    - moved her sheet to her profile
    - changed her membergroups -- writer primary, shopkeeper/adult witch/wizard secondary
    - rewrote her appearance and her personality
    - small tweaks in the history and wrote recent years
    - changed her rp sample
    - changed her spine

    approved~
    « Last Edit: August 08, 2017, 04:40:05 AM by Dylan »
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  • Offline Jane Lennon
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #13 on: August 05, 2017, 04:44:17 PM »
    Character's name: @Jane Lennon
    Changes made:

    - updated jobs
    - updated recent history
    - added RP sample

    approved
    « Last Edit: August 07, 2017, 02:11:44 AM by Ashton »

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  • Offline Prosper Lachapelle
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    Re: Character changes & retcons!
    « Reply #14 on: August 06, 2017, 04:09:36 PM »
    Character's name: @Prosper Lachapelle
    Changes made:
    • Updated his history
    • Rewrote appearance
    • Rewrote personality
    @Prosper Lachapelle hi lovely, there are some things missing in prosper's personality. once you c&p those things in i'll take a look.
    « Last Edit: August 07, 2017, 02:13:06 AM by Ashton »